It has been a week since I started the Term 2 focus assessment (91478: Respond to significant connections across texts) with my Level 3 English class. Before we started the assessment, I created a document that would guide the students through each step of the written report. I create this document as a response to the tight time frame around the assessment and knowing where my students were at with the reading, I scaffolded the assessment to help give them some much needed direction. I wrote a reflection on this and the reasons why I decided to go down this route. In the reflection I stated that "I have scaffolded the document so that the students have a break down on the expectations for Introduction, Body paragraphs and Conclusion. I have also included a pre-assessment task where they can reflect on the texts that they have reviewed already so that they can use it as a reference point during the crafting of their text. I am hoping that this will help close the loop on the time lost whilst I was away." (Alby's Blog: Entry - 09/06/22)
I wanted to ensure that the students felt comfortable and confident in the assessment and by doing so, they can see a finish line with this internal assessment. Breaking it down, providing sentence guides/prompts and speaking to each section with the students has become an integral part in helping them get through the first stages of the assessment. For the last week I have gone through each part of the assessment with the students, through whole discussions and presentations to one-on-one discussions. I have made sure to spend time with each student and make sure that they understand what they are doing. I have also given a deadline for each of the different sections in the assessment so that they can work efficiently when they are in class and not waste time. I am going to explain how each part of the assessment has gone since we started it a week ago.
TASK ONE: Reflecting + Reviewing the Readings
The premise of this task is to get the students to reflect and review on the readings. For context, the Connections Assessment is based on four texts - three from Tim O'Brien's novel 'The Things They Carried' and the fourth text is chosen by the student. For task one, I wanted the students to reflect and review the texts and record what the main message is and then discuss which texts connect and describe how they connect.
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Student Exemplar: Task One |
With task one, I knew that getting the students involved in a class discussion would be the best way to get them engaged. We spoke about each text focusing on what the main message is from each story. For students who were not comfortable sharing, they were encouraged to write down anything that they felt was appropriate for the main message. I encouraged the students to keep the wording around the main message minimal and specific - there is no need to delve into the message yet at this stage. The final part of task one is to review each text and their main message and see which ones connect. Again, we discussed this as a class and the students were able to see how the texts connect. Reviewing the texts and the main theme that was shown from the text, helped the students understand what the text was about. When it came to seeing which ones connect and how they connect, the students were able to navigate through this because they spent time reviewing the stories. The students agreed and decided that the texts 'The Man I Killed' and 'How to tell a true War Story' had a significant connection, leaving Speaking of Courage and their fourth text as the second significant connection. Most of the students did not have a fourth text but were able to start looking for one once they saw how the first two texts connected. Task one is a crucial part in starting the assessment as it is designed to help students review, reflect and understand the texts (the heart of the assessment) and how they connect.
TASK TWO: The Overall Theme
With task two, the focus is to identify an overall theme. Once the students reviewed the texts and found the significant connections, they now had to come up with an overall theme that ties all of the texts together. I provided some prompts to help give the students some direction but for the most part, they were able to come up with an overall theme (in the form of a thesis statement).
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Student Exemplar: Task Two |
This overall theme is the thread that the students will reference each text too once they start writing their Connections Report. We had a class discussion around task two and the students were able to find their own overall theme once we spoke about it as a group.
INTRODUCTION + CONNECTION 1 + 2 PARAGRAPH STRUCUTRE
Task one and two are designed to give the students a good backbone when starting the assessment. Once they completed task one and task two (this took two sessions to complete) they were then asked to start on the introduction and connection 1 (paragraph 1) focusing on the first two texts that connect. The students were able to start the introduction on their own because they had a good understanding of the texts and they had a theme to connect it to. The students are currently working on completing their introduction (most have finished it) with majority either finishing their first paragraph and starting the second paragraph (significant connection 2).
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Student Exemplar: Introduction |
The introduction was structured in way where they have to reflect and write a short review of the texts that they have read. Taking the time to complete task one and really understand the texts, will help the students with the introduction. You can see in the student exemplar that the student was able to draw on the notes that they wrote for task one and use it for their introduction.
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Student Exemplar: Connection One |
For Connection One the students will have to dig deeper and explore each text in more depth. They are asked to unpack the texts, define and explain how they are connected, provide evidence from the text to show the connection, explain how the texts link to their overall theme and what is the author's purpose. The guiding instructions I have on in the orange section are a set of questions/instructions for the students to follow once they start writing their response.
Overall, starting the assessment has been good and I feel that the students have a good grasp of it. I have a few students who did not complete the readings so I have had to work with them through each part of the document, but they are at the stage now where they have enough of a footing to get started with their introduction. My goal is to get the students to complete their first draft by the end of Week 9, give them feedback and then complete their final draft in Week 10. So far - so good.